tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4706282221761427996.post3569932474653474873..comments2024-03-07T20:15:45.996-08:00Comments on The Bitter Script Reader: The "And Then" Problem - as explained by South Park's creators.The Bitter Script Readerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16575166527272639709noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4706282221761427996.post-10314370870876391952011-10-11T17:05:05.583-07:002011-10-11T17:05:05.583-07:00I completely get what Trey and Matt are saying but...I completely get what Trey and Matt are saying but doesn't this flow of Therefores and Buts get interrupted when switching between plot lines?<br /><br />Or, are they inferring each plot line should be written in Therefores and Buts?Chrishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10561209799255934532noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4706282221761427996.post-10741664371272180402011-10-06T03:36:08.995-07:002011-10-06T03:36:08.995-07:00A page and a half! Are you kidding? If you cant su...A page and a half! Are you kidding? If you cant summarise your story on less that a page, you're in trouble - whatever the genre and/or complexity of the story. Never mind rewriting your scripts, I always advise writers to come back to me when they've re-written their synopses/treatments. It takes great writing skills to know how to hone down your ideas and produce a concise and carefully considered synopsis. So many problems with plot, structure and character can be avoided by putting in the effort at this early stage. If you cant get it right at this stage, that good luck when you come unstuck in the middle of the world's longest Act II!theincrediblesulkhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10913454637369423451noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4706282221761427996.post-47435551142802391132011-10-06T02:14:16.258-07:002011-10-06T02:14:16.258-07:00I wish this video would be put on a site where vie...I wish this video would be put on a site where viewers outside America could view it.ingridhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04106967302785862380noreply@blogger.com