tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4706282221761427996.post7486493780177537895..comments2024-03-07T20:15:45.996-08:00Comments on The Bitter Script Reader: Friday Free-for-All: Jay Mohr's Action on media violenceThe Bitter Script Readerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16575166527272639709noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4706282221761427996.post-82501420918676140032011-01-15T08:36:17.857-08:002011-01-15T08:36:17.857-08:00I have an unrelated question.
When I write I try...I have an unrelated question. <br /><br />When I write I try to ferret out orphan sentences. You know: <br /><br />xxxxx xxxxxx xx xxxxx x xxxxx xxxxx<br />orphan. <br /><br />Where the text wraps around for just one word. It helps save space, plus it's kind of annoying. <br /><br />However, I know readers want to get down the page, so is it annoying to find many end-to-end single sentences. <br /><br />xxxx xxxxxx xxxxxxxxx xx xxxxxxxxxx xxx xxxxxxx.<br /><br />Then dialog. <br /><br />xxxx xxxxxx xxxxxxxxx xx xxxxxxxxxx xxx xxxxxxx.<br /><br />And another long, single line description. Couplets look nicer on the page. <br /><br />xxxx xxxxxx xxxxxxxxx xx xxxxxxxxxx xxx xxxxx,<br />xxx xx xxxxxxxxxx xxx xxxxxxx x xxxxxxx xxxxxx. <br /><br />Or am I oversensitive since it's not something anyone even gives a second thought? Readers are notorious for their trivial complaints.Zeinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06151369355218415007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4706282221761427996.post-32023060770967179612011-01-14T16:22:00.767-08:002011-01-14T16:22:00.767-08:00Great scene!
Shame this series didn't last.
T...Great scene!<br />Shame this series didn't last.<br /><br />Thanks for posting.DBChttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02398647288827645585noreply@blogger.com