tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4706282221761427996.post3224341524053532197..comments2024-03-07T20:15:45.996-08:00Comments on The Bitter Script Reader: "The Golf Ball" - building to a Seinfeld-like payoffThe Bitter Script Readerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16575166527272639709noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4706282221761427996.post-63565124289169042862011-12-19T12:10:48.185-08:002011-12-19T12:10:48.185-08:00Crap. You're right and I can't seem to ed...Crap. You're right and I can't seem to edit it from my phone. I'll have to fix it later.The Bitter Script Readerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16575166527272639709noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4706282221761427996.post-15970036708827843162011-12-19T12:01:09.024-08:002011-12-19T12:01:09.024-08:00Is "embroidered into a lie" another writ...Is "embroidered into a lie" another writing-group-ism? I like it -- it implies entangled, but through one's own inability to stop adding on unnecessary details to an initial, less obviously discoverable lie.Katehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09313738786459612583noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4706282221761427996.post-29377805946044612522011-12-19T08:34:15.800-08:002011-12-19T08:34:15.800-08:00"The sea was angry that day. Like an old man ..."The sea was angry that day. Like an old man trying to send back soup at a deli."<br /><br />I've never been a big fan of the show, but always thought this line was hilarious.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4706282221761427996.post-50844489534061833892011-12-19T08:05:33.138-08:002011-12-19T08:05:33.138-08:00Wow...you almost did "the Golf ball" in ...Wow...you almost did "the Golf ball" in this write up - if only you had used Chekhov's name in the first paragraph, then concluded it in that last line. But - it still worked for me. Now I gotta go find that Seinfeld episode and watch it for the 235th time. Ugggh!TVsBucketofBolthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04432373632581392575noreply@blogger.com