tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4706282221761427996.post8738915602751443109..comments2024-03-07T20:15:45.996-08:00Comments on The Bitter Script Reader: 12-Step Screenwriting: Week One - Idea, Concept and StoryThe Bitter Script Readerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16575166527272639709noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4706282221761427996.post-29237124440917939972012-07-08T09:39:24.804-07:002012-07-08T09:39:24.804-07:00I'm curious about what you think should be wri...I'm curious about what you think should be written in one's logline: the concept or the story? <br /><br />I've read so much conflicting advice regarding what to put in your logline (and seen both -- a slick, mean, six-word concept and two long sentences that describe the story/essence of the screenplay).<br /><br />Thanks for all your help!Jill Rasmussenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17555843950694683041noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4706282221761427996.post-86113686229081596442012-06-27T04:39:24.653-07:002012-06-27T04:39:24.653-07:00I found this by accident but I will definitely be ...I found this by accident but I will definitely be back! I like that he gave examples rather than just definitions. We don't all learn just by reading; seeing a lesson in action helps me a lot!Daniellehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05912049736452418388noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4706282221761427996.post-47068071015180829902012-06-04T07:28:05.351-07:002012-06-04T07:28:05.351-07:00I liked it. Short but informative, to the point, a...I liked it. Short but informative, to the point, and strong examples of each subject.<br /><br />Looking forward to the next 11.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4706282221761427996.post-11867220240094388022012-05-31T17:36:07.049-07:002012-05-31T17:36:07.049-07:00I believe the part of the pool that has the crysta...I believe the part of the pool that has the crystal clear water is not at all deep. The other end is filled to the brim with fetid waste sewage. What we need is a filter. If this helps clean out the traps then I'm all for it.Dennis Khayehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08825423514820226622noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4706282221761427996.post-52803236662975691322012-05-30T20:29:24.556-07:002012-05-30T20:29:24.556-07:00I say keep going! What we need is more diversity,...I say keep going! What we need is more diversity, not just in personnel, but in world views and ideas. The best way to get it is to disseminate the information, far and wide. Those who can learn, will learn. Those who cannot will be smacked down.Archie Duxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03778262778885264931noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4706282221761427996.post-51630741861421849022012-05-30T16:10:41.236-07:002012-05-30T16:10:41.236-07:00Why, why, why? Why are you teaching more people to...Why, why, why? Why are you teaching more people to get into this already overflowing pool? <br /><br />Shouldn't you start off with a video of reasons why not to write?Steve the Creephttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10265147408563991491noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4706282221761427996.post-48262592163394226422012-05-30T10:48:48.283-07:002012-05-30T10:48:48.283-07:00Heh-heh. Bitter puppet.Heh-heh. Bitter puppet.Divine Art of Yoga Center Ashramhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15382678391197925155noreply@blogger.com